Feedback to Final Idea 'Dragons Den' Pitch

This is our Dragons Den pitch:


We pitched our idea to Euan and he gave us a large amount of constructive feedback:

• He said that he liked our idea, and thought it was cool to focus on the representation of a 90's kid in the media nowadays.
• He said that perhaps there could be more charaters, and maybe more settings, as this will make it more interesting. 
• Overall, however, he said he enjoyed the idea, and thought that it was unique and unusual.